tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363838446991842850.post6814658826041519355..comments2023-10-23T17:08:08.542-04:00Comments on Married to Calamity: Six Sentence Sunday 1/15lexcadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18094072290983267178noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363838446991842850.post-90147109532713608282012-01-16T12:53:55.720-05:002012-01-16T12:53:55.720-05:00Ooooo, poor Dima!Ooooo, poor Dima!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363838446991842850.post-36464222977497801282012-01-16T08:08:58.013-05:002012-01-16T08:08:58.013-05:00Nice struggle you've done here :-)Nice struggle you've done here :-)Sandra Sookoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08864799097052526762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363838446991842850.post-54359511472798987202012-01-16T05:53:23.698-05:002012-01-16T05:53:23.698-05:00Poor thing. Does she even know why she's been ...Poor thing. Does she even know why she's been changed?Pippa Jayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15146591827060731958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363838446991842850.post-46399238877629420852012-01-15T21:10:33.660-05:002012-01-15T21:10:33.660-05:00I love that last line.I love that last line.Layna Pimentelhttp://laynapimentel.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363838446991842850.post-87051637284923877812012-01-15T20:54:22.038-05:002012-01-15T20:54:22.038-05:00Thanks everyone :) I tried really hard to avoid he...Thanks everyone :) I tried really hard to avoid her becoming melodramatic...it was difficult.lexcadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18094072290983267178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363838446991842850.post-16434149693352542632012-01-15T17:18:38.901-05:002012-01-15T17:18:38.901-05:00Good emotion. Nice six.Good emotion. Nice six.JENNIFER WILCKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16218241106543538422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363838446991842850.post-82518832956470908062012-01-15T15:42:15.707-05:002012-01-15T15:42:15.707-05:00Wow, interesting. What's going on here? I'...Wow, interesting. What's going on here? I'll come back next week to find out!Karysa Fairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09519776785650008126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363838446991842850.post-66348194626409236632012-01-15T15:39:55.743-05:002012-01-15T15:39:55.743-05:00This is both very deep and intriguing.This is both very deep and intriguing.D Carneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06453390999707087274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363838446991842850.post-67665071117694845642012-01-15T14:06:02.734-05:002012-01-15T14:06:02.734-05:00A very well written, telling six. The character...A very well written, telling six. The character's sadness and confusion shines through your words. Nicely done.Sandra Renee Pessohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12206247562167014745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363838446991842850.post-81256213330328544462012-01-15T13:45:31.637-05:002012-01-15T13:45:31.637-05:00Ooh, intriguing! Nice six :)Ooh, intriguing! Nice six :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363838446991842850.post-45308796732968294672012-01-15T12:36:25.036-05:002012-01-15T12:36:25.036-05:00I like the feel of this a lot. My only thought wou...I like the feel of this a lot. My only thought would be to not repeat "swam". Otherwise, the moment has great atmosphere.Laura Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06405372483109781087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363838446991842850.post-63125476234549183002012-01-15T09:42:25.254-05:002012-01-15T09:42:25.254-05:00Great writing!Great writing!Alixhttp://romancingalix.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363838446991842850.post-8512282693291772752012-01-15T09:29:29.833-05:002012-01-15T09:29:29.833-05:00Excellent writing. I feel her struggle.Excellent writing. I feel her struggle.Lisa Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04249215936412244450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363838446991842850.post-82910596688708476082012-01-15T07:19:14.962-05:002012-01-15T07:19:14.962-05:00I can sense the sadness and struggle within the ch...I can sense the sadness and struggle within the character. Nice six!Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com