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29 May 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 5/29

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And as always, thank you for coming back week after week after week! Your comments mean the world to me. Especially since it didn't end.

Here's the continuation of last week's. For editorial purposes, Sven's wearing a gray t-shirt and cotton pants. Yeah, I know, not as hot as the towel, but he's not trying to seduce her. Yet.


            “You can never get the water hot enough, can you,” she mused.      
            The room was nothing like she expected the great Sven Vidar to stay in. She imagined him in posh penthouse suites with champagne chilling on ice, or at least a mini bar. This place had neither; it was comfortable, cozy, small.
            She already felt too close to him.
            “You know, it’s difficult to get that perfect fire-and-brimstone temperature from a Kohler." 
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21 comments:

  1. Jessica E. SubjectMay 29, 2011 at 6:35 AM

    I have a feeling they'll be making some heat of their own soon. Like the 'fire-and-brimstone' comment.

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  2. Sandra SookooMay 29, 2011 at 9:18 AM

    lol great last line!

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  3. JoAnne KenrickMay 29, 2011 at 9:18 AM

    oh... Sven has surprised her... more to him than she thought, love it. And am loving the last line... prefect fire and brimstone temp! hehe FAB SIX!

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  4. Lisa FoxMay 29, 2011 at 11:24 AM

    I believe the temperature is steadily rising between them though!

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  5. Sarah GrimmMay 29, 2011 at 12:07 PM

    Love the last line! Great job!

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  6. Zee MonodeeMay 29, 2011 at 12:14 PM

    Love the contrast between real and imagined. Good job!

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  7. Carolyn RosewoodMay 29, 2011 at 12:16 PM

    Great last line!

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  8. Jessica KnaussMay 29, 2011 at 12:43 PM

    Yes, great last line! Great six!

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  9. Susanna FraserMay 29, 2011 at 1:58 PM

    Fun six, and agree on loving the last line.

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  10. Rebecca RoyceMay 29, 2011 at 2:01 PM

    That last line is fantastic!

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  11. AnonymousMay 29, 2011 at 7:00 PM

    Love that last line.

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  12. Sandra NachlingerMay 29, 2011 at 8:37 PM

    I'm really enjoying your humor. It makes sexy become even sexier! Good writing.

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  13. AllureVanSanzMay 29, 2011 at 9:44 PM

    Perfect ending to the six. Great job.

    Best,
    Allure Van Sanz

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  14. Felicity HeatonMay 30, 2011 at 3:58 AM

    Great job with the six. I'm intrigued. I'll have to go back and read your previous ones to find out more about them.

    Felicity

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  15. UnknownMay 30, 2011 at 9:57 AM

    Sweet! Love that last line!

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  16. J.A. BeardMay 30, 2011 at 6:35 PM

    I'm with everybody else. I love that last line.

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  17. J.C. MartinMay 31, 2011 at 2:37 AM

    Y'know, even after you specifically stated that he's in T-shirt and pants, I still couldn't help but picture him in a towel! Great 6!

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  18. Pippa JayMay 31, 2011 at 6:44 AM

    I love that last line - it just seems like a normal conversation, but at the end you realise it isn't. :)

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  19. Roberta WalkerMay 31, 2011 at 9:31 AM

    Your writing is fantastic! That last line is perfect, reminds you that Sven is not your everday hottie :)

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  20. Jayel KayeMay 31, 2011 at 10:11 AM

    Last line was very cute. I liked the whole thing.

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  21. lexcadeMay 31, 2011 at 3:22 PM

    Thanks everyone :)

    @JC It's fun to visualize him in a towel. He's my current crush lol.

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