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02 October 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 10/02

This is me on muscle relaxers


Welcome to another (a)rousing rendition of Six Sentence Sunday! I'm pleased as punch to be back with you guys this week after last week. Oy. The good news is that I'm feeling a lot better, so it won't take me half the week to catch up on posts *yay*! So, onward to this week's post! As always, please spend some time with my fellow Sixers. These are some talented peeps who blow my mind every week!



This week, I'm skipping to the end of Dima's fight with the sixteen because this is the opening to bigger and more important things in Dima's existence as a Humani. She's just been thrashed by the sixteen and is getting some unexpected help.

I felt like a doll tossed around by a rabid dog.
My spine tingled. Arms wrapped around me, perfectly imitating the snake’s body without the pressure. I opened my eyes enough to see Lorenzo by my side. “My God,” he whispered, “I’m sorry, Janelle. I’m so sorry.”


*Dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuunnnnnnnnnn* 
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32 comments:

  1. AlixOctober 2, 2011 at 7:55 AM

    Great descriptive imagery.. I'm so looking forward to more and more of this story. Great work lovely Lady!

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  2. Paula MartinOctober 2, 2011 at 8:07 AM

    Intriguing - look forward to more of this!

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  3. Sarah GrimmOctober 2, 2011 at 8:33 AM

    Wow! I want more!

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  4. Lisa FoxOctober 2, 2011 at 8:37 AM

    Hmmm, this does sound like a very interesting turn in the story!

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  5. Gem SivadOctober 2, 2011 at 8:46 AM

    Don't know where it's going but I'm on board to find out. Great six!

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  6. Sandra SookooOctober 2, 2011 at 10:12 AM

    Oh wow, so intriguing and love the dog pic!

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  7. KaceyHammellOctober 2, 2011 at 10:15 AM

    ok, i need to know where this is going. what a tease...
    gr8 6

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  8. Sam CrescentOctober 2, 2011 at 10:41 AM

    Great six

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  9. UnknownOctober 2, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    Can't wait to read more!

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  10. D CarneyOctober 2, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    Your six is great and very emotional; but in truth I'm still chuckling at the picture of the dog above. So cute!

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  11. gemma parkesOctober 2, 2011 at 11:06 AM

    Great six, fantastic description!

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  12. Joanne StewartOctober 2, 2011 at 11:29 AM

    Agree--great description and very intriguing!

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  13. Laura KayeOctober 2, 2011 at 11:47 AM

    That dog pic was a big hit with my kids! :) great six!

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  14. Zee MonodeeOctober 2, 2011 at 12:10 PM

    Very intriguing!

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  15. Cherie MarksOctober 2, 2011 at 12:17 PM

    Oh, my! Sounds like she barely survived. Great six!

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  16. UnknownOctober 2, 2011 at 12:18 PM

    Uh-oh - what happened to her? Whatever it was, it doesn't sound pleasant...

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  17. Christa DesirOctober 2, 2011 at 12:53 PM

    Nice. Good teaser. Very intriguing.

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  18. Taryn KincaidOctober 2, 2011 at 1:08 PM

    A name, not a number! The plot thickens!

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  19. Cara BristolOctober 2, 2011 at 1:32 PM

    Hmm...intriguing, especially the snake comparison.

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  20. Sandra Renee PessoOctober 2, 2011 at 1:50 PM

    Sensational six! Love the pic too. :-)

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  21. LindsayOctober 2, 2011 at 2:00 PM

    Definitely intrigued here and wondering what going to happen next

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  22. PiperOctober 2, 2011 at 2:39 PM

    Brilliant imagery. I'm eager to know more. Awesome six!

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  23. AnonymousOctober 2, 2011 at 3:37 PM

    Interesting. So was he trying to kill her? Is that why he's sorry? Great six.

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  24. Vivien DeanOctober 2, 2011 at 4:00 PM

    Curious to see where this is going now. Thanks for sharing!

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  25. J.A. BeardOctober 2, 2011 at 6:00 PM

    Now, curious about what he has to feel guilty about.

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  26. Carrie Ann RyanOctober 2, 2011 at 7:35 PM

    Okay - now I need to know whats going on! Great six!

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  27. Cassandra CarrOctober 2, 2011 at 10:54 PM

    What will happen next? Lorenzo - love that name!

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  28. UnknownOctober 2, 2011 at 11:12 PM

    Very tight writing and yes! I love the name Lorenzo, too. Very exotic ;)

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  29. Liia Ann WhiteOctober 3, 2011 at 2:25 AM

    All I have to say it Wow! Great six.

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  30. UnknownOctober 3, 2011 at 2:29 AM

    I can definitely feel her pain! Awesome Six! I hope she is gonna be ok.

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  31. 1000th.monkeyOctober 3, 2011 at 6:14 PM

    Interesting and I'm curious what happens next... but I had a question about your first line. Would a rabid dog attack a doll? I thought when dogs have rabies they are stimulated to bite/attack by movement, and a doll wouldn't move, therefore it probably wouldn't be a target anymore than a stick or rock.

    But I'm not 100% sure of that...

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  32. Brien MichaelsOctober 5, 2011 at 9:40 AM

    Oh my! I need to know more!

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