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For hours afterward I tried to figure it out. What did she mean? The wheel of frustration kept turning as I stared into the pond, facing myself head-on for the first time since I awoke. My eyes, large blue cat eyes, swam with the emotions that swam in the eyes of a human. They cried human tears, expressed human grief, betrayed human fears. I forced myself to stare into my face because I wanted to remember what it meant to be human.
I can sense the sadness and struggle within the character. Nice six!
ReplyDeleteExcellent writing. I feel her struggle.
ReplyDeleteGreat writing!
ReplyDeleteI like the feel of this a lot. My only thought would be to not repeat "swam". Otherwise, the moment has great atmosphere.
ReplyDeleteOoh, intriguing! Nice six :)
ReplyDeleteA very well written, telling six. The character's sadness and confusion shines through your words. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThis is both very deep and intriguing.
ReplyDeleteWow, interesting. What's going on here? I'll come back next week to find out!
ReplyDeleteGood emotion. Nice six.
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone :) I tried really hard to avoid her becoming melodramatic...it was difficult.
ReplyDeleteI love that last line.
ReplyDeletePoor thing. Does she even know why she's been changed?
ReplyDeleteNice struggle you've done here :-)
ReplyDeleteOoooo, poor Dima!
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