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10 April 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 4/10

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This snippet occurs at the end of main character's break. She's expecting Jasper to return for her. She's *un*pleasantly surprised when he doesn't.

She stopped right in front of me, white coat gently rippling in the breeze, and bent down to look at me. I wanted to back away from her, like I had from others, but I was drawn to her. The sugary scent of a deep connection ransacked my brain and demanded images that my mind couldn’t conjure. She clasped the collar around my neck. She wanted to be distant and cold, like my animal nature tried to force me to be. I thought she’d make a much better panther. 
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21 comments:

  1. Taryn KincaidApril 10, 2011 at 2:16 AM

    Duality is completely fascinating. Beginning to get a sneaking suspicion who this white-coated character is...waiting for more!

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  2. Rebecca RoyceApril 10, 2011 at 9:13 AM

    He thought she'd make a better panther. LOL. Well done, very descriptive and intense.

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  3. Claire RobynsApril 10, 2011 at 9:21 AM

    Panther shape-shifter? cool. like the way they both seem to resisting their true nature

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  4. Marie DeesApril 10, 2011 at 9:22 AM

    oh, hot panthers! This is going to be fun.

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  5. UnknownApril 10, 2011 at 9:24 AM

    I like this SIX! It opens up so many questions for me! Can't wait til you post more...

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  6. Cate MastersApril 10, 2011 at 9:32 AM

    Great sensory details. Love that last line!

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  7. Gem SivadApril 10, 2011 at 9:43 AM

    Big cats purr loud. Can't wait for more action!

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  8. Sandra SookooApril 10, 2011 at 9:44 AM

    nice snippet! Need more!

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  9. Sarah GrimmApril 10, 2011 at 10:15 AM

    Oh, this is getting more and more interesting every week! Can't wait to read more!

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  10. UnknownApril 10, 2011 at 10:37 AM

    WOW! Loved the Six... I want to read more!

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  11. Jayel KayeApril 10, 2011 at 11:12 AM

    Love it when characters fight their true natures

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  12. Jessica KnaussApril 10, 2011 at 11:41 AM

    Vivid struggles here, with apparently both characters being dual. Intriguing!

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  13. LindsayApril 10, 2011 at 12:04 PM

    Love the twist at the end. Intrigued.

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  14. Jessica E. SubjectApril 10, 2011 at 1:12 PM

    Nice six! I'm really intrigued. :)

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  15. AnonymousApril 10, 2011 at 2:50 PM

    A collar... This could get interesting!

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  16. Susanna FraserApril 10, 2011 at 3:26 PM

    Fascinating six!

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  17. AnonymousApril 11, 2011 at 12:19 AM

    I love logging on to these 6-sentence sites. . .each one is unique and intriguing! I never fail to be impressed. Yours this week is certainly no exception! Thanks for sharing!

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  18. Pip GreenApril 11, 2011 at 4:44 AM

    'I wanted to back away from her, like I had from others, but I was drawn to her.' Can't wait to find out more!

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  19. Roberta WalkerApril 11, 2011 at 6:53 AM

    I need to know more!

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  20. UnknownApril 11, 2011 at 3:33 PM

    Great six. Love the ".. sugary scene.." line!

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  21. Lauri J OwenApril 11, 2011 at 10:05 PM

    Hmmm. Very intriguing! I'll be back next week to hear more!

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