OK. Back to Spark. I PROMISE Duality will see the light of day soon. I'm gonna start working on it again. Spark's been a lot easier on me, though. And I love Duke. She makes me happy.
To this point, Duke and Shook are investigating a series of Ripper-esque homicides. As a Psycher, Duke is the only one the squad with the ability to speak to the deceased, and this is a glimpse of her first spirit interview.
“Adrielle Baxter?”
She nodded, wrapping her arms protectively around herself. I thanked God that they never looked like their corpses.
I flashed my badge, slowly edging toward her. “My name is Duke. I want to help you.”
Yeah, I'd be thankful they don't look like their corpses too. Nice six!
ReplyDeleteNever expected "Duke" to be a woman! Interesting ability she has there!
ReplyDeletethis story sounds so good!
ReplyDeleteA female Duke, huh? I like it!
ReplyDeleteLove that Duke is a woman. Great six!
ReplyDeleteYou sure got my attention! Sounds like a great storyline. I like the names of your characters.
ReplyDeleteohhh spirit interview, and yes, thank goodness they look like their former selves rather than their corpses (takes me back to the old movie, Beetlejuice...the blue receptionist with slit wrists) Fab six! LOVED IT
ReplyDeleteI love that part. Six little sentences, but so poweful!
ReplyDeleteVery nice six! I'm totally intrigued. :)
ReplyDeleteIntriguing. Love the paranormal twist.
ReplyDeleteGreat concept. Not unlike Pushing Daisies, but more serious.
ReplyDeleteThis story sounds great! Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThanks, everyone :)
ReplyDeleteThis story sound so good.
ReplyDeleteA very nice six! Intriguing!
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