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12 June 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 6/12

Hello, everybody! Six Sentence Sunday is here again! I missed it last week, but our esteemed Sara Brookes was busy making the new site awesome. She even put in a forum (AKA time vortex). So, if you haven't, please say thanks to her for all her hard work, and check out the site here

OK. Back to Spark. I PROMISE Duality will see the light of day soon. I'm gonna start working on it again. Spark's been a lot easier on me, though. And I love Duke. She makes me happy.

To this point,  Duke and Shook are investigating a series of Ripper-esque homicides. As a Psycher, Duke is the only one the squad with the ability to speak to the deceased, and this is a glimpse of her first spirit interview.

“Adrielle Baxter?”
            She nodded, wrapping her arms protectively around herself. I thanked God that they never looked like their corpses.
            I flashed my badge, slowly edging toward her. “My name is Duke. I want to help you.”

15 comments:

  1. Yeah, I'd be thankful they don't look like their corpses too. Nice six!

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  2. Never expected "Duke" to be a woman! Interesting ability she has there!

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  3. Love that Duke is a woman. Great six!

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  4. You sure got my attention! Sounds like a great storyline. I like the names of your characters.

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  5. ohhh spirit interview, and yes, thank goodness they look like their former selves rather than their corpses (takes me back to the old movie, Beetlejuice...the blue receptionist with slit wrists) Fab six! LOVED IT

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  6. I love that part. Six little sentences, but so poweful!

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  7. Very nice six! I'm totally intrigued. :)

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  8. Intriguing. Love the paranormal twist.

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  9. Great concept. Not unlike Pushing Daisies, but more serious.

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  10. This story sounds great! Nicely done!

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  11. This story sound so good.

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