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03 September 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 9/4

Glad to have you guys back for another Six Sentence Sunday! Thanks, as always, for stopping by and sharing part of your Sunday with me. I appreciate (read: live for) your comments! And don't forget to share the love with my fellow SSS participants. There are some seriously talented people who participate and never fail to knock my socks off!

This week, I'm finishing up Dima's fight with the Thirteen. We're starting to get to the juicy parts!

I jumped back before heavy paws crushed me, part of her skin still in my mouth.
She gurgled and collapsed, eyes glazed; her head crashed to the ground. With her dying breath, she hissed, blood spraying from her mouth and through the open wound.
            A low growl rumbled in my throat, every muscle tense. Wishing James would come in so I could rip him apart, too. Seemed only fair.
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18 comments:

  1. Jessica E. SubjectSeptember 3, 2011 at 10:22 PM

    A gruesome and well-written six. :)

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  2. AlixSeptember 4, 2011 at 12:45 AM

    Sensational six, very gruesome description indeed.

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  3. Carrie Ann RyanSeptember 4, 2011 at 12:46 AM

    Oh my. *shudders* What did James do?

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2011 at 1:10 AM

    What a fab six! A woman scorned, i think...

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  5. SonyaSeptember 4, 2011 at 1:59 AM

    I like how bloodthirsty Dima is. ;)

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  6. Sarah GrimmSeptember 4, 2011 at 6:17 AM

    Well done! I look forward to more juicy parts. :-)

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  7. Lisa FoxSeptember 4, 2011 at 8:23 AM

    Gory and intense! I love it!

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  8. gemma parkesSeptember 4, 2011 at 10:31 AM

    Very graphic, well written!

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  9. Taryn KincaidSeptember 4, 2011 at 10:35 AM

    Graphic!

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  10. UnknownSeptember 4, 2011 at 10:50 AM

    James better look out! Great imagery here! Perfect for what this scene needed!

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  11. S.LiraSeptember 4, 2011 at 11:28 AM

    Wow, thats powerful!

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  12. Cherie MarksSeptember 4, 2011 at 11:38 AM

    Tough one! Great action scene! Great six!

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  13. LindsaySeptember 4, 2011 at 2:42 PM

    Well written. Love it

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  14. Kharisma RhayneSeptember 4, 2011 at 3:05 PM

    awesome...very descriptive six...love it

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  15. Vivien DeanSeptember 4, 2011 at 5:28 PM

    Love the visceral detail. Thanks for sharing!

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  16. UnknownSeptember 4, 2011 at 9:02 PM

    "blood spraying from her mouth and through the open wound" what a strong visual. Very intense.

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  17. Monica Enderle PierceSeptember 5, 2011 at 2:11 AM

    I love that you didn't hold back. And 'seemed only fair' was a great bit of characterization. Great six!

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  18. 1000th.monkeySeptember 5, 2011 at 4:32 PM

    ...such visual description, I felt a little queasy... good job :)

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