10 April 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 4/10

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This snippet occurs at the end of main character's break. She's expecting Jasper to return for her. She's *un*pleasantly surprised when he doesn't.

She stopped right in front of me, white coat gently rippling in the breeze, and bent down to look at me. I wanted to back away from her, like I had from others, but I was drawn to her. The sugary scent of a deep connection ransacked my brain and demanded images that my mind couldn’t conjure. She clasped the collar around my neck. She wanted to be distant and cold, like my animal nature tried to force me to be. I thought she’d make a much better panther. 

21 comments:

Taryn Kincaid said...

Duality is completely fascinating. Beginning to get a sneaking suspicion who this white-coated character is...waiting for more!

Rebecca Royce said...

He thought she'd make a better panther. LOL. Well done, very descriptive and intense.

Claire Robyns said...

Panther shape-shifter? cool. like the way they both seem to resisting their true nature

Marie Dees said...

oh, hot panthers! This is going to be fun.

Kathleen Grieve said...

I like this SIX! It opens up so many questions for me! Can't wait til you post more...

Cate Masters said...

Great sensory details. Love that last line!

Gem Sivad said...

Big cats purr loud. Can't wait for more action!

Sandra Sookoo said...

nice snippet! Need more!

Sarah Grimm said...

Oh, this is getting more and more interesting every week! Can't wait to read more!

Tigris Eden said...

WOW! Loved the Six... I want to read more!

Jayel Kaye said...

Love it when characters fight their true natures

Jessica K said...

Vivid struggles here, with apparently both characters being dual. Intriguing!

Lindsay said...

Love the twist at the end. Intrigued.

Jessica Subject said...

Nice six! I'm really intrigued. :)

diannehartsock said...

A collar... This could get interesting!

Susanna Fraser said...

Fascinating six!

paulatohlinecalhoun1951 said...

I love logging on to these 6-sentence sites. . .each one is unique and intriguing! I never fail to be impressed. Yours this week is certainly no exception! Thanks for sharing!

Pippa Jay said...

'I wanted to back away from her, like I had from others, but I was drawn to her.' Can't wait to find out more!

Roberta Walker said...

I need to know more!

Gayle said...

Great six. Love the ".. sugary scene.." line!

Lauri J Owen said...

Hmmm. Very intriguing! I'll be back next week to hear more!

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