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This snippet occurs at the end of main character's break. She's expecting Jasper to return for her. She's *un*pleasantly surprised when he doesn't.
She stopped right in front of me, white coat gently rippling in the breeze, and bent down to look at me. I wanted to back away from her, like I had from others, but I was drawn to her. The sugary scent of a deep connection ransacked my brain and demanded images that my mind couldn’t conjure. She clasped the collar around my neck. She wanted to be distant and cold, like my animal nature tried to force me to be. I thought she’d make a much better panther.
21 comments:
Duality is completely fascinating. Beginning to get a sneaking suspicion who this white-coated character is...waiting for more!
He thought she'd make a better panther. LOL. Well done, very descriptive and intense.
Panther shape-shifter? cool. like the way they both seem to resisting their true nature
oh, hot panthers! This is going to be fun.
I like this SIX! It opens up so many questions for me! Can't wait til you post more...
Great sensory details. Love that last line!
Big cats purr loud. Can't wait for more action!
nice snippet! Need more!
Oh, this is getting more and more interesting every week! Can't wait to read more!
WOW! Loved the Six... I want to read more!
Love it when characters fight their true natures
Vivid struggles here, with apparently both characters being dual. Intriguing!
Love the twist at the end. Intrigued.
Nice six! I'm really intrigued. :)
A collar... This could get interesting!
Fascinating six!
I love logging on to these 6-sentence sites. . .each one is unique and intriguing! I never fail to be impressed. Yours this week is certainly no exception! Thanks for sharing!
'I wanted to back away from her, like I had from others, but I was drawn to her.' Can't wait to find out more!
I need to know more!
Great six. Love the ".. sugary scene.." line!
Hmmm. Very intriguing! I'll be back next week to hear more!
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