26 June 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 6/26

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This week's SSS is from Spark again. I keep thinking I'll go back to Duality once construction is almost finished. It's turning into something pretty cool, if I say so myself *toot toot*.

We get to move on to Step two: Comfort. Although the next exchange isn't particularly comforting.
*Warning. There is an F-bomb ahead. Just sayin.*
“Adrielle,” I barked, trying to snap her attention back to me. “I want you to listen to me, okay? You’re all right.”
            “I’m dead!” she screamed. “I’m fucking dead and you want to tell me I’m all right? You’re sick.”

15 comments:

romancingalix said...

Wonderful six. Her frustration and anger is so very real. Thank you.

Jessica Subject said...

Her reaction is so realistic. Love it! Great six!

Sarah Grimm said...

Very realistic reaction from her. Fantastic!

Sandra Sookoo said...

lol loved it!

Lisa Fox said...

'All right' can mean so many things. That is some great dialogue!

JoAnne Kenrick said...

LMAO... I love her reactions, and his calmness to it all. It's like meh, you're dead. So what, worse things have happened hehe LOVE IT!

Paula Martin said...

Great Six - he's calm and she's frantic, great mix!

gayleramage said...

lol, I think I'd have that reaction, too!

Alisha Robinson said...

Dead? Hmm ... interesting I love her reaction too!

writeintention said...

Great Six!

Happy Sunday,
Kristin Wolfgang

Lauri J Owen said...

What an intense interchange! You pulled me right in and made me want to keep reading. Great six!

Taryn Kincaid said...

I can see how thinking she's dead might make her a tad crabby. Just sayin'

J.A. Beard said...

I think I would have the exact reaction myself. :)

agirlintheworld said...

I love this scene. It's so powerful!

Christa said...

Great scene choice. I love the "I'm dead" thing...such a good teaser.

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