02 October 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 10/02

This is me on muscle relaxers


Welcome to another (a)rousing rendition of Six Sentence Sunday! I'm pleased as punch to be back with you guys this week after last week. Oy. The good news is that I'm feeling a lot better, so it won't take me half the week to catch up on posts *yay*! So, onward to this week's post! As always, please spend some time with my fellow Sixers. These are some talented peeps who blow my mind every week!



This week, I'm skipping to the end of Dima's fight with the sixteen because this is the opening to bigger and more important things in Dima's existence as a Humani. She's just been thrashed by the sixteen and is getting some unexpected help.

I felt like a doll tossed around by a rabid dog.
My spine tingled. Arms wrapped around me, perfectly imitating the snake’s body without the pressure. I opened my eyes enough to see Lorenzo by my side. “My God,” he whispered, “I’m sorry, Janelle. I’m so sorry.”


*Dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuunnnnnnnnnn* 

32 comments:

Alix said...

Great descriptive imagery.. I'm so looking forward to more and more of this story. Great work lovely Lady!

Paula Martin said...

Intriguing - look forward to more of this!

Sarah Grimm said...

Wow! I want more!

Lisa Fox said...

Hmmm, this does sound like a very interesting turn in the story!

Gem Sivad said...

Don't know where it's going but I'm on board to find out. Great six!

Sandra Sookoo said...

Oh wow, so intriguing and love the dog pic!

KaceyHammell said...

ok, i need to know where this is going. what a tease...
gr8 6

Sam Crescent said...

Great six

Eleri Stone said...

Can't wait to read more!

Dee Carney said...

Your six is great and very emotional; but in truth I'm still chuckling at the picture of the dog above. So cute!

gemma parkes said...

Great six, fantastic description!

Joanne Stewart said...

Agree--great description and very intriguing!

Laura Kaye said...

That dog pic was a big hit with my kids! :) great six!

Zee Monodee said...

Very intriguing!

Cherie Marks said...

Oh, my! Sounds like she barely survived. Great six!

Ranae Rose said...

Uh-oh - what happened to her? Whatever it was, it doesn't sound pleasant...

Christa said...

Nice. Good teaser. Very intriguing.

Taryn Kincaid said...

A name, not a number! The plot thickens!

Cara Bristol said...

Hmm...intriguing, especially the snake comparison.

Sandra Bunino said...

Sensational six! Love the pic too. :-)

Lindsay said...

Definitely intrigued here and wondering what going to happen next

Piper said...

Brilliant imagery. I'm eager to know more. Awesome six!

writeidea said...

Interesting. So was he trying to kill her? Is that why he's sorry? Great six.

Vivien Dean said...

Curious to see where this is going now. Thanks for sharing!

J.A. Beard said...

Now, curious about what he has to feel guilty about.

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

Okay - now I need to know whats going on! Great six!

Cassandra Carr said...

What will happen next? Lorenzo - love that name!

Ana Hart said...

Very tight writing and yes! I love the name Lorenzo, too. Very exotic ;)

Liia Ann White said...

All I have to say it Wow! Great six.

Kathleen Grieve said...

I can definitely feel her pain! Awesome Six! I hope she is gonna be ok.

1000th.monkey said...

Interesting and I'm curious what happens next... but I had a question about your first line. Would a rabid dog attack a doll? I thought when dogs have rabies they are stimulated to bite/attack by movement, and a doll wouldn't move, therefore it probably wouldn't be a target anymore than a stick or rock.

But I'm not 100% sure of that...

Brien Michaels said...

Oh my! I need to know more!

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