This is me on muscle relaxers
Welcome to another (a)rousing rendition of Six Sentence Sunday! I'm pleased as punch to be back with you guys this week after last week. Oy. The good news is that I'm feeling a lot better, so it won't take me half the week to catch up on posts *yay*! So, onward to this week's post! As always, please spend some time with my fellow Sixers. These are some talented peeps who blow my mind every week!
This week, I'm skipping to the end of Dima's fight with the sixteen because this is the opening to bigger and more important things in Dima's existence as a Humani. She's just been thrashed by the sixteen and is getting some unexpected help.
I felt like a doll tossed around by a rabid dog.
My spine tingled. Arms wrapped around me, perfectly imitating the snake’s body without the pressure. I opened my eyes enough to see Lorenzo by my side. “My God,” he whispered, “I’m sorry, Janelle. I’m so sorry.”
*Dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuunnnnnnnnnn*
32 comments:
Great descriptive imagery.. I'm so looking forward to more and more of this story. Great work lovely Lady!
Intriguing - look forward to more of this!
Wow! I want more!
Hmmm, this does sound like a very interesting turn in the story!
Don't know where it's going but I'm on board to find out. Great six!
Oh wow, so intriguing and love the dog pic!
ok, i need to know where this is going. what a tease...
gr8 6
Great six
Can't wait to read more!
Your six is great and very emotional; but in truth I'm still chuckling at the picture of the dog above. So cute!
Great six, fantastic description!
Agree--great description and very intriguing!
That dog pic was a big hit with my kids! :) great six!
Very intriguing!
Oh, my! Sounds like she barely survived. Great six!
Uh-oh - what happened to her? Whatever it was, it doesn't sound pleasant...
Nice. Good teaser. Very intriguing.
A name, not a number! The plot thickens!
Hmm...intriguing, especially the snake comparison.
Sensational six! Love the pic too. :-)
Definitely intrigued here and wondering what going to happen next
Brilliant imagery. I'm eager to know more. Awesome six!
Interesting. So was he trying to kill her? Is that why he's sorry? Great six.
Curious to see where this is going now. Thanks for sharing!
Now, curious about what he has to feel guilty about.
Okay - now I need to know whats going on! Great six!
What will happen next? Lorenzo - love that name!
Very tight writing and yes! I love the name Lorenzo, too. Very exotic ;)
All I have to say it Wow! Great six.
I can definitely feel her pain! Awesome Six! I hope she is gonna be ok.
Interesting and I'm curious what happens next... but I had a question about your first line. Would a rabid dog attack a doll? I thought when dogs have rabies they are stimulated to bite/attack by movement, and a doll wouldn't move, therefore it probably wouldn't be a target anymore than a stick or rock.
But I'm not 100% sure of that...
Oh my! I need to know more!
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