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Today's snippet follows last week's, just a little farther in the chapter. This begins a showdown between the crazy spider woman (Maggie) and Dr. James (the asshat). "Caleb" is the name Maggie's been saying over and over through the scene.
“Caleb’s dead,” James snapped.
At that, Maggie froze; the rage swelling inside her drifted out of every pore. Her chest heaved. Her hands balled into fists. After a few breaths, little trickles of blood snaked between her fingers and dropped into little puddles on the perfect white tile.
James remained unfazed and started to walk away, but Maggie made one swift movement toward him and grabbed his lab coat, smudging it with red.
12 comments:
Maggie embodies pretty much every nightmare I ever had and then gives me new ones. O_o She scares me, lol.
Very intense. :) A great six.
Wonderful six sentences! I wish you a ton of sales with your books! Happy Sunday and Happy Halloween!
Stephanie Adkins
http://stephanieadkins.blogspot.com/
Maggie is intense, I love intense.
Maggie is a total nightmare! And James should have never turned his back on her.
This was so vivid and intense! Wow!
Love the visual imagery of this. Well done!
Intense, descriptive writing. You really paint a picture. Well done.
Oooooh! Tense!
Oh, intense! Tension pours out of this scene. LOVE IT! :)
Awesome work! Happy Halloween lovely Lady!
good tension. It makes me want more
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