12 June 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 6/12

Hello, everybody! Six Sentence Sunday is here again! I missed it last week, but our esteemed Sara Brookes was busy making the new site awesome. She even put in a forum (AKA time vortex). So, if you haven't, please say thanks to her for all her hard work, and check out the site here

OK. Back to Spark. I PROMISE Duality will see the light of day soon. I'm gonna start working on it again. Spark's been a lot easier on me, though. And I love Duke. She makes me happy.

To this point,  Duke and Shook are investigating a series of Ripper-esque homicides. As a Psycher, Duke is the only one the squad with the ability to speak to the deceased, and this is a glimpse of her first spirit interview.

“Adrielle Baxter?”
            She nodded, wrapping her arms protectively around herself. I thanked God that they never looked like their corpses.
            I flashed my badge, slowly edging toward her. “My name is Duke. I want to help you.”

15 comments:

Jessica E. Subject said...

Yeah, I'd be thankful they don't look like their corpses too. Nice six!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Never expected "Duke" to be a woman! Interesting ability she has there!

Sandra Sookoo said...

this story sounds so good!

Lisa Fox said...

A female Duke, huh? I like it!

Anonymous said...

Love that Duke is a woman. Great six!

Anonymous said...

You sure got my attention! Sounds like a great storyline. I like the names of your characters.

JoAnne Kenrick said...

ohhh spirit interview, and yes, thank goodness they look like their former selves rather than their corpses (takes me back to the old movie, Beetlejuice...the blue receptionist with slit wrists) Fab six! LOVED IT

agirlintheworld said...

I love that part. Six little sentences, but so poweful!

Zee Monodee said...

Very nice six! I'm totally intrigued. :)

Patricia Preston said...

Intriguing. Love the paranormal twist.

Jessica Knauss said...

Great concept. Not unlike Pushing Daisies, but more serious.

Sarah Grimm said...

This story sounds great! Nicely done!

lexcade said...

Thanks, everyone :)

Anonymous said...

This story sound so good.

Lydia Kang said...

A very nice six! Intriguing!