Pulling from Spark one more time before I go back to Duality (edits are...well...they're edits). This is just a little more from Duke's conversation with her wisp, Adrielle Baxter. Last week was Step Three: Gain Confidence, in which Duke told Adrielle that Duke's husband and dog are bound, just like she is.
“Oh yeah? And where are they now?”
“Hopefully, Greg took our dog to the park. Kanzys really liked the park.” I had to try not to break down. Losing Greg had been hard, but watching Kanzys starve himself to death in mourning…that was way worse.
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Yes, animals do get very attached to their owners, bound or not. It's sad to watch since there's not much one can do. A nice six!
Aw, how sad. Poor Kanzys :( Great snippet.
Very neat way to show grief that made me sad too.
Aww, this breaks my heart! Well written, but very, very sad.
I know. I'm a horrible person >:D
*sniff* I'm off to hug my furry child.
Your voice with grief is really gripping, Thank you for a great six!
Awww, Kanzys ((hugs)) You totally pulled at my heart strings with this six, nicely handled grief -- came across very naturally and heartfelt. Great job!
Great six! :)
Very poignant. Nicel done.
Yes, that would be way worse. Emotional six!
Aww heartbreaking :(!
Thanks for sharing! Love the six!
Awww!!
Oo sad! Nice.
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That is amazingly sad! Nice to see tho that Duke can talk about it. Enjoyed your six!
Oh, how sad! Good writing, but too sad.
Yeah, yours isn't one of the funny snippets I've read today! It's Sad. Nice writing, but sad.
Very descriptive: "...starve himself to death in mourning..." I can feel the sadness.
This was a sad Six. Looking forward to more.
Oooooh. *sniff*
~Xakara
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Lots of feeling here. Good description.
Very well written, yet very sad.
Oh, how very sad!
How sad. I hope Kanzys turns around. There's always a way to get a dog to eat without harming them
Awww! Greg was well-loved! It shows in this SIX! Well done!
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