21 August 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 8/21

 Happy Sunday, y'all! And thank you for stopping in on another Six Sentence Sunday. Your comments mean the world to me, and I'm always open to suggestions and critiques. Even if it's six sentences, I'm sure there's something I could be doing better ;)


Today's six is from that same scene in Duality. This time, I'm gonna show you what Dima's up against.

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My God, she was incredible. Stout like a tiger, and yet sleek like a wolf with a wolf’s head and slender muzzle, which was black. Her delicate, rounded ears peeked through a wild coat of long fur, which was a mingling of orange and gray from her face to her tail; her chest and paws were white, and a bold striped pattern covered her back and tail. Her eyes were large, unmistakably feline, and stared straight through me. Her paws were at least twice the size of a normal tiger’s. This thing was a killing machine, cunning and savage, and I already felt like dead meat.


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25 comments:

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

Scary! Love the last line. Your descriptions are so vivid that I could picture it exactly! Great Job!

Alix said...

Amazingly vivid description. Fantastic six. Well done!

Pip Green said...

That last line sums it all up. Chilling.

Kerrianne Coombes said...

A great description. I agree, the last line is fab.

Jessica Subject said...

Nice description! And I agree about the last line. :)

Sarah said...

Hey! This is a really smooth, vivid description. You very skillfully painted the picture for me as the reader! The only thing I would change is the repetition of the word "wolf" in that second sentence. I'd just say she was sleek, with a wolf's head, etc. Wonderful job!!

Heather Thurmeier said...

Awesome description! Love this and totally want to read more.

Lisa Fox said...

Wow! What a description! Just straight up incredible.

laynap said...

Fantastic description!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Great description.

lexcade said...

Thanks, everyone!!! Sarah, you make a good point (like usual). I'll change that. :)

Dee Carney said...

Very descriptive! Nice job!

Angela S. Stone said...

Oooo! Very descriptive! I love it!

xx
A.

Zee Monodee said...

Looooove the last line!

Paula Martin said...

Vivid description, great six!

Lindsay said...

Love the description of her. The last line really sums it up

Jessica K said...

Yikes, he's really up against it now!

Vivien Dean said...

I can't decide if there's a double meaning in that last line or not, but I like it. :)

J.A. Beard said...

Great description and great last line.

Kathleen Grieve said...

Very powerful description of her!!! FABULOUS Six!

Bree said...

Yikes! Intimidating to say the least!!

1000th.monkey said...

...definitely not a lap-cat...

nice description :)

Jayel Kaye said...

beautiful description

lbdiamond said...

Love the description! (Love the puppy pic too-so cute!!) :D

Xakara said...

Great description! Glad I could catch up and didn't miss it! :)

~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS

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