Today's six is from that same scene in Duality. This time, I'm gonna show you what Dima's up against.
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My God, she was incredible. Stout like a tiger, and yet sleek like a wolf with a wolf’s head and slender muzzle, which was black. Her delicate, rounded ears peeked through a wild coat of long fur, which was a mingling of orange and gray from her face to her tail; her chest and paws were white, and a bold striped pattern covered her back and tail. Her eyes were large, unmistakably feline, and stared straight through me. Her paws were at least twice the size of a normal tiger’s. This thing was a killing machine, cunning and savage, and I already felt like dead meat.
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24 comments:
Scary! Love the last line. Your descriptions are so vivid that I could picture it exactly! Great Job!
Amazingly vivid description. Fantastic six. Well done!
That last line sums it all up. Chilling.
A great description. I agree, the last line is fab.
Nice description! And I agree about the last line. :)
Hey! This is a really smooth, vivid description. You very skillfully painted the picture for me as the reader! The only thing I would change is the repetition of the word "wolf" in that second sentence. I'd just say she was sleek, with a wolf's head, etc. Wonderful job!!
Awesome description! Love this and totally want to read more.
Wow! What a description! Just straight up incredible.
Fantastic description!
Thanks, everyone!!! Sarah, you make a good point (like usual). I'll change that. :)
Very descriptive! Nice job!
Oooo! Very descriptive! I love it!
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A.
Looooove the last line!
Vivid description, great six!
Love the description of her. The last line really sums it up
Yikes, he's really up against it now!
I can't decide if there's a double meaning in that last line or not, but I like it. :)
Great description and great last line.
Very powerful description of her!!! FABULOUS Six!
Yikes! Intimidating to say the least!!
...definitely not a lap-cat...
nice description :)
beautiful description
Love the description! (Love the puppy pic too-so cute!!) :D
Great description! Glad I could catch up and didn't miss it! :)
~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS
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