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Today's snippet comes from Dima's battle with the tiger/wolf hybrid. We join this fight already in progress.
I pushed her off. Moved to the edge of the woods as she darted into the trees. Her whimpering echoed, but suddenly, the whimpering stopped, replaced by an irate growl. When she emerged again, she seethed. Teeth gleamed in moonlight. Blood dripped from just below her eye.
18 comments:
Wow! Okay, I've gotta know what happens next! :)
~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS
Things are getting very serious now! This sounds like quite a fight.
Tense six! Well written, great job.
Intense and graphic description. Very vivid.
Wow! very graphic descriptions! I want to know what happened!
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Yikes! Fight, fight!..
Eep! Great six, and love that pic - it made me smile.
Tight and tense -- an unseen fight in the woods, so mysterious.
Great short sentences to emphasize the action of the fight. Nice Six!
Oh I wonder what happened! Great hook!
I love a good fight!!
The terse voice really helps build tension. Good job!
Ooh, visceral. Love the teeth gleaming in the moonlight.
Okay - I need to know what happens!
Great six! You have left me needing more!
OOOOOHHHHH!!! Someone's in for it! Great descriptions in this Six!!
Vivid imagery! Great six -- sound slike things are getting intense!
hmmm... will we find out what just happened off-screen?
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