28 August 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 8/28

 



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Today's snippet comes from Dima's battle with the tiger/wolf hybrid. We join this fight already in progress.

I pushed her off. Moved to the edge of the woods as she darted into the trees. Her whimpering echoed, but suddenly, the whimpering stopped, replaced by an irate growl. When she emerged again, she seethed. Teeth gleamed in moonlight. Blood dripped from just below her eye.

18 comments:

Xakara said...

Wow! Okay, I've gotta know what happens next! :)

~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS

Lisa Fox said...

Things are getting very serious now! This sounds like quite a fight.

Alix said...

Tense six! Well written, great job.

Taryn Kincaid said...

Intense and graphic description. Very vivid.

Angela S. Stone said...

Wow! very graphic descriptions! I want to know what happened!

xx
A

Dee Carney said...

Yikes! Fight, fight!..

Lucy Felthouse said...

Eep! Great six, and love that pic - it made me smile.

Jessica K said...

Tight and tense -- an unseen fight in the woods, so mysterious.

Cherie Marks said...

Great short sentences to emphasize the action of the fight. Nice Six!

Chrystalla Thoma said...

Oh I wonder what happened! Great hook!

Bree said...

I love a good fight!!

Vivien Dean said...

The terse voice really helps build tension. Good job!

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

Ooh, visceral. Love the teeth gleaming in the moonlight.

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

Okay - I need to know what happens!

Kerrianne Coombes said...

Great six! You have left me needing more!

Kathleen Grieve said...

OOOOOHHHHH!!! Someone's in for it! Great descriptions in this Six!!

J.C. Martin said...

Vivid imagery! Great six -- sound slike things are getting intense!

1000th.monkey said...

hmmm... will we find out what just happened off-screen?

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