Married to Calamity: Six Sentence Sunday 9/4

03 September 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 9/4

Glad to have you guys back for another Six Sentence Sunday! Thanks, as always, for stopping by and sharing part of your Sunday with me. I appreciate (read: live for) your comments! And don't forget to share the love with my fellow SSS participants. There are some seriously talented people who participate and never fail to knock my socks off!

This week, I'm finishing up Dima's fight with the Thirteen. We're starting to get to the juicy parts!

I jumped back before heavy paws crushed me, part of her skin still in my mouth.

She gurgled and collapsed, eyes glazed; her head crashed to the ground. With her dying breath, she hissed, blood spraying from her mouth and through the open wound.

A low growl rumbled in my throat, every muscle tense. Wishing James would come in so I could rip him apart, too. Seemed only fair.

18 comments:

Jessica E. Subject said...: A gruesome and well-written six. :); September 3, 2011 at 10:22 PM
Alix said...: Sensational six, very gruesome description indeed.; September 4, 2011 at 12:45 AM
Carrie Ann Ryan said...: Oh my. *shudders* What did James do?; September 4, 2011 at 12:46 AM
Anonymous said...: What a fab six! A woman scorned, i think...; September 4, 2011 at 1:10 AM
Sonya said...: I like how bloodthirsty Dima is. ;); September 4, 2011 at 1:59 AM
Sarah Grimm said...: Well done! I look forward to more juicy parts. :-); September 4, 2011 at 6:17 AM
Lisa Fox said...: Gory and intense! I love it!; September 4, 2011 at 8:23 AM
gemma parkes said...: Very graphic, well written!; September 4, 2011 at 10:31 AM
Taryn Kincaid said...: Graphic!; September 4, 2011 at 10:35 AM
Unknown said...: James better look out! Great imagery here! Perfect for what this scene needed!; September 4, 2011 at 10:50 AM
S.Lira said...: Wow, thats powerful!; September 4, 2011 at 11:28 AM
Cherie Marks said...: Tough one! Great action scene! Great six!; September 4, 2011 at 11:38 AM
Lindsay said...: Well written. Love it; September 4, 2011 at 2:42 PM
Kharisma Rhayne said...: awesome...very descriptive six...love it; September 4, 2011 at 3:05 PM
Vivien Dean said...: Love the visceral detail. Thanks for sharing!; September 4, 2011 at 5:28 PM
Unknown said...: "blood spraying from her mouth and through the open wound" what a strong visual. Very intense.; September 4, 2011 at 9:02 PM
Monica Enderle Pierce said...: I love that you didn't hold back. And 'seemed only fair' was a great bit of characterization. Great six!; September 5, 2011 at 2:11 AM
1000th.monkey said...: ...such visual description, I felt a little queasy... good job :); September 5, 2011 at 4:32 PM

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