03 September 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 9/4

Glad to have you guys back for another Six Sentence Sunday! Thanks, as always, for stopping by and sharing part of your Sunday with me. I appreciate (read: live for) your comments! And don't forget to share the love with my fellow SSS participants. There are some seriously talented people who participate and never fail to knock my socks off!

This week, I'm finishing up Dima's fight with the Thirteen. We're starting to get to the juicy parts!

I jumped back before heavy paws crushed me, part of her skin still in my mouth.
She gurgled and collapsed, eyes glazed; her head crashed to the ground. With her dying breath, she hissed, blood spraying from her mouth and through the open wound.
            A low growl rumbled in my throat, every muscle tense. Wishing James would come in so I could rip him apart, too. Seemed only fair.

18 comments:

Jessica Subject said...

A gruesome and well-written six. :)

Alix said...

Sensational six, very gruesome description indeed.

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

Oh my. *shudders* What did James do?

Kerrianne Coombes said...

What a fab six! A woman scorned, i think...

Sonya Clark said...

I like how bloodthirsty Dima is. ;)

Sarah Grimm said...

Well done! I look forward to more juicy parts. :-)

Lisa Fox said...

Gory and intense! I love it!

gemma parkes said...

Very graphic, well written!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Graphic!

Kathleen Grieve said...

James better look out! Great imagery here! Perfect for what this scene needed!

Rawiya said...

Wow, thats powerful!

Cherie Marks said...

Tough one! Great action scene! Great six!

Lindsay said...

Well written. Love it

Kharisma Rhayne said...

awesome...very descriptive six...love it

Vivien Dean said...

Love the visceral detail. Thanks for sharing!

Eleri Stone said...

"blood spraying from her mouth and through the open wound" what a strong visual. Very intense.

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

I love that you didn't hold back. And 'seemed only fair' was a great bit of characterization. Great six!

1000th.monkey said...

...such visual description, I felt a little queasy... good job :)

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