11 December 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 12/11


Good Sunday, my peeps! Hope everyone's having a nice weekend. I actually have the day off, so I'll be able to hang out and read all the awesome snippets in the comfort of my own home ^_^ 

If you'd like to read along with me, check out the official Six Sunday site here.

I'm staying in Duality for a while (maybe until I untangle and finish Spark). This scene takes place immediately after last week's.

The bang! sounded like a bomb blast. Sylvia clamped her hand over my mouth, but I couldn’t make a sound. I clutched Sylvia’s arm, tears streaming.
Maggie’s rage died, like a candle’s flame snuffed without a care. She crumpled on top of him, a jumble of spider legs and dark, stringy hair. When he pushed her off, he stared at her, wild-eyed, blood streaming from his nose, chest heaving.

9 comments:

Alix said...

Intense six, with a great pace weaved with description. Great job!

Eleri Stone said...

Gritty, fast-paced and intense. Great action scene.

kerriannecoombes said...

Some great descriptions in this six!

Jessica Subject said...

You really captured emotion & intensity. Well done! :)

Lisa Fox said...

How utterly terrible! What a great scene!

Karla Doyle said...

Very visual!

Sandra Bunino said...

Intense scene and so well written. Well done. Sensational six!

Sandra Sookoo said...

awesome scene! :-)

Ruth Madison said...

I love how descriptive this is. I can really feel it.

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