29 May 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 5/29

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And as always, thank you for coming back week after week after week! Your comments mean the world to me. Especially since it didn't end.

Here's the continuation of last week's. For editorial purposes, Sven's wearing a gray t-shirt and cotton pants. Yeah, I know, not as hot as the towel, but he's not trying to seduce her. Yet.


            “You can never get the water hot enough, can you,” she mused.      
            The room was nothing like she expected the great Sven Vidar to stay in. She imagined him in posh penthouse suites with champagne chilling on ice, or at least a mini bar. This place had neither; it was comfortable, cozy, small.
            She already felt too close to him.
            “You know, it’s difficult to get that perfect fire-and-brimstone temperature from a Kohler." 

21 comments:

Jessica Subject said...

I have a feeling they'll be making some heat of their own soon. Like the 'fire-and-brimstone' comment.

Sandra Sookoo said...

lol great last line!

JoAnne Kenrick said...

oh... Sven has surprised her... more to him than she thought, love it. And am loving the last line... prefect fire and brimstone temp! hehe FAB SIX!

Lisa Fox said...

I believe the temperature is steadily rising between them though!

Sarah Grimm said...

Love the last line! Great job!

Zee Monodee said...

Love the contrast between real and imagined. Good job!

Carolyn Rosewood said...

Great last line!

Jessica K said...

Yes, great last line! Great six!

Susanna Fraser said...

Fun six, and agree on loving the last line.

Rebecca Royce said...

That last line is fantastic!

murdersandmysteries said...

Love that last line.

Sandy Ruth said...

I'm really enjoying your humor. It makes sexy become even sexier! Good writing.

AllureVanSanz said...

Perfect ending to the six. Great job.

Best,
Allure Van Sanz

Felicity Heaton said...

Great job with the six. I'm intrigued. I'll have to go back and read your previous ones to find out more about them.

Felicity

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Kathleen Grieve said...

Sweet! Love that last line!

J.A. Beard said...

I'm with everybody else. I love that last line.

J.C. Martin said...

Y'know, even after you specifically stated that he's in T-shirt and pants, I still couldn't help but picture him in a towel! Great 6!

Pippa Jay said...

I love that last line - it just seems like a normal conversation, but at the end you realise it isn't. :)

Roberta Walker said...

Your writing is fantastic! That last line is perfect, reminds you that Sven is not your everday hottie :)

Jayel Kaye said...

Last line was very cute. I liked the whole thing.

lexcade said...

Thanks everyone :)

@JC It's fun to visualize him in a towel. He's my current crush lol.

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