Hey all! Back from my hiatus (and still not caught up on the last 2 weeks of entries). Vacation was awesome, but now my nose is back to the grindstone. Remember to check out the other Six Sunday participants!
Here's this week's offering from Duality. The next fight. Like with the other two fights, Dima's in a virtual reality room.
A haunting howl escaped the forest; I thought I detected a tinge of a roar. “What the hell?” To my right, leaves crunched and twigs snapped. She wanted me to know she was nearby. My heart raced as I heard sounds from one direction and then another. Where is it?
19 comments:
Oh, very ominous. VR can still get the heart a-racing. Nice six!
Leaves ya hanging, don't it? Woot! Great six!
Very suspenseful!
Suspenseful!
Glad you've returned to this. Looking forward to more.
Great suspenseful six!! well done and I'm very glad your back!
Intense and suspenseful! You build up the tension nicely!
Scary six. I like how it's 'virtual' yet still drew me in.
Intense! Wonder what she's looking for? Nice 6!
Welcome back! What a creepy, wonderful six!
Very atmospheric, even though it's virtual! Great six.
Hey I left you a present on my blog! :D
INTENSE! I could almost feel the presence of the other one approaching! Well done!
Ooooo - great tension building!
Ooh, intriguing snippet!
I read your synopsis of Duality and I love the story's premise. Today's six sentences made me even more interested. Great tension.
Even when you know it's virtual, the tension and suspense remain. Lovely! :)
~Xakara
A Way To a Dragon's Heart 6SS
Thanks, everyone! I missed you guys too!!!! Feels good to be reading and sharing again.
@Sandy, thanks so much! I love this story and I'm glad that more people, even people who don't necessarily like science fiction, are enjoying it too. Makes me happy!
Susspenseful description. Enjoyed your six.
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